I have to give you kudos!! i mean it is ridiculous that you could fit a poem this wonderful into such a hard structure i mean having to have it be an acrostic both ways that's talent hunn!!

great wording to : ) i loved the picture you painted in my mind!! great job!! 5/5

I love poems like this! They are so creative and this one was so hard to do. I can only imagine how difficult this was for you but it worked out in the end. I don't have enough brain power to write a poem of this greatness so I admire you so much for pulling it off. This was beautiful and really displays the great things about relationships. I hate that more people haven't commented this. It's truely brillant. Wonderful work as always :) Nik