Wow so close to being X-rated it was amazing lol. Really you did a very good job at describing how two young lovers felt. Great job 5/5

I have to agree with TJ's comment. Love on the beach, near the water, sounds of waves. What better way to create memories. Tasteful, sensual. Well done. 5/5

Wow Ingrid you have painted such a beautiful scene. i can visualize the 2 lovers on the beach.The choice of words really got me into the mood for love

Excellent Job
5/5

Hehe, just another beautiful cute romantic stories of yours :)

keep them coming...

take care, wish you the best!!

This is beautiful gave me goose bumps keep writing like this

A well penned romantic poem Ingrid, and very tastefully done. Love on the beach, and what Love!
Well done!