Comments : My Love, My Peter Pan

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Sasha,

    This is really an outstanding poem.
    Hat's off for you, you crafted it so beautifully.

    Your eyes are a lighthouse that lead me to shore
    Capturing the essence of emotions unknown before
    Take me away to a land, where we shall never age
    You're the beginning of my life's very first page

    ^^^
    Can I go there too, to that land where we don't age?

    Excellent work:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid