Comments : Dear Diary

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Another exquisite write from you. So many things are shared within the diary regardless if it's actually ever written down. We contain those memories within us. The secrets they can hold would be the only way a man would ever really begin to understand a woman. lol. A marvelous write yet again and I am not suprised in the least. Simply beautiful dear.
    Take Care,
    Kay

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Yes, indeed a dairy is a good friend. He will never expose you, like human friends sometimes do;)

    I enjoyed this one too, Deana:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I really like this one Deana

    I wonder , one day will I look for you
    but you will be gone

    I would change the second line to

    But find you gone, I like this stanza though, it spoke to me because I have been in that position, I love my diary, but it has disappeared in the past and it is like someone stole a piece of you.

    I like the way you came to end it, a very enjoyable read, nice work.