Comments : This is the story of a girl...

  • 15 years ago

    by Mackenzie Quiroz

    Hey I just wanted to let you know Im sorry! something similar happened to me, I loved this guy, and he did something really horriable to me and well thats that. well I still love him so much we dated for 2 1/2 years and he just left me like 2 weeks ago, and everyone keeps telling me that time heals everything and well there right, time does. but the thing that hurts the most is that he has a poems and quotes page that he hasnt been to in a while but it still says something about us on it.......

  • 15 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    Its hardi know
    i've been through alot of hurt and heart breaks in the past years and i'm still young
    its good that you get these feelings out in writing
    just remember pain is weakness leaving the body
    with ever cut you become stronger

    smile girlfriend!
    and keep writing! Your really good!

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    It's hard when we have break ups. 5/5 x

  • 14 years ago

    by Ixora

    Monloup this is simply heartbreaking. It could be a part of a whole book. I absolutley loved the way you wrote it and you can truly feel the emotion. I hope you keep writing you are one of the best talents I know. I love you! <3

    -Aida

  • 10 years ago

    by David Amenger

    Excellent piece.The storyline is so so sad.