Wow!

Grant, this really was a captivating poem.
I would end it like this: before the sun will climb. That somehow seems more poetic, but that just me, lol.
I loved the whole story and could almost see inside this poor man's head.

Good work, my friend:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

A dark poem, although the first verse gives me the impression of a love poem beginning. It drew me in. Your words seem to say that you would do anything to have your one true love with you, even if that meant their destruction. Well done. 5/5

This was really interesting and awkward to be actually reading something like this from you. But youve really put this poem in a unique prespective.. coming from someone's mind.. deep and darkly written. Well done Grant.

5/5.

Temps ;]

Definitely dark, but a very interesting and good poem. i like it. :)

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
=0 your writing is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
i think this is one of your best poems.
(all of them are amazing tho)
but this one was unbelievable.
you are SO talented,
"Fifty years now and even more
This ghostly ritual just as before
Every morning just past three
I blow my brains out, it's my destiny"
I loved this stanza,
it was so powerful and just gave the whole poem such an impact.
this whole poem was absolutely perfect!!!!!
Great job Grant,
you deserve way more than a 5!!!