Wow. Its starts off as such a simplistic poem, and reaches to something farther. The ending is so sad though. =[

ashley

I really enjoyed this. Very powerful and emotional ending. Keep up the great work. Shanik

Wow. this was deep. the wording was perfect, the emotions so put forth. it was truly a sad love story portrayed into a beautifully written poem.
--lovedroughtmelody

Very sad, deep and emotional.
amazing
5/5