This could fit into several catergories. It is about life and it is sad and nature is included. The words are powerful and this line touched me: Sadness always has living face.

An excellent write. 5/5

Occult shadow of my fortune tree
There, I find myself bleeding silently.

loved these lines esp.great poem.5

Sourav
I feel so much sadness coming from your words.

Castigated by the bows of sorrow
Broken wings of a tiny sparrow
Leafless branch of a quiet tree
I find inspiration for this poetry

It seems so many poems come from the pain and sorrow we feel in our hearts. I think writing gives us a release from the pain.

Sadness always has living face
Life tends to wear solitary dress
Occult shadow of my fortune tree
There, I find myself bleeding silently.

We usually do hold in the pain and suffer in silence...you did a wonderful job on this piece.
Take care
Cindy

A wonderful poem Sou !
I really love how you were inspired by the little broken things in life..amazing how sorrow inspires us this way.

Leafless branch of a quiet tree
I find inspiration for this poetry
- I loved those two lines a lot, the beginning stanza was very good also..though I would prefer removing "this" from the last line..it gives more facility to the reader, for the syllable count is pretty long in the line.

Sadness always has living face
- I think you need an "a" before the word "living"..am I right here?

Sudden death of a delicate reverie
Tearful eyes read life's theory
- How did you come up with these stuff? hehe, I loved the first line so very much, the metaphor was amazing.

a great job in this piece =)
Write on !

Great writing

Sadness always has living face
Life tends to wear solitary dress