Im going to be honest

its got emotion but it seems unconstructed there is no rythem that i can feel and there are maybe 2 gramatical errors than i can see on the 3rd paragraph it should read safe.....saved and on the 2nd paragraph when you say no one sees my scares or cuts is it scars and cuts instead?

its looks like you wrote this while you were severly depressed and you just write what you feel which is a good thing but it needs more work i have the same problem sometimes its a easy thing to do please dont think of this as me trashing you think of it as constructive critisism

Relly good but like Deathsdarkness said it could use a little touching up. I love the poem's topic and the whole emotional pain behind it. I too loved the second stanza. It just held something in it that I can relate to.

Wonderful poem, keep it up. 4/5. ~KM~