Every time when i read your poem I was hoping for someting non suicidal, but looks like this just adds to your list of suicidal poems. Well certainly you have compose this poem well and had a clear story line of how you want to start it and end it. I think the last stanza was done nicely to wrap up the poem.

Well again if you need someone to talk to just PM ok

Great Job for the poem
5/5

That was a great poem... i read it over and over it wuzz realli gudd keep up da gud work

Very touching, moving poem. I loved everything about it ..the opening lines,,the ending (though sad), telling just how helpless, someone who feels like this can be. LOL.(Espec liked the 7th verse.. the truth being deep in her eyes). Take care again, Olwin. LOL