It was very good. i loved the flow and i think it was a perfect length (no offense intended to AblissfulDREAMER) over all it was a great poem with real emotion.

Ishia

Naww this was a very good poem, i liek the way you ended it, the emotions were expressed very well and the flow of the poem was great as well, overall i think it was a great poem, written well.
keep up the great work

5/5

The flow was great, I liked the theme and I think you portrayed it very well :) great Job :)