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  • 15 years ago

    by RoseBlood

    Wow...this is a strong poem.
    Every word used is like...I don't know how to descriebe it. And the last line simply stayed in my mind, and I found myself repeating it:
    "I'm leaving now before I regret it"
    -so powerful, really.
    Quite short, but still an excellent piece. :)
    Keep it up.:)

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Aww very sad but you expressed yourself very well and its a short but very good written poem.

    Keep up the great work