It has no meaning
it holds no great truth
just empty singing
and words that sooth

~i love theese lines..very nice.
though the first stanza to me seems a little all over the place, but then as the reader reads on its like something is forming in front of them, taking shape..i was confused at first but then things brcame clear..not bad at all.

nice simple words, the structure is good and i like the repetetivness of some lines/words.

good good. IBE