Hey Saul,

Great poem I like the fact that it basically gives a different aspect or view every time you read it. It's like you notice something different every line. Very intruiging.. Already I've read it three times. Great work, I really enjoyed it.

Rebbeca

Excellent poem

I really liked this one Saul. One of your best. Shanik

A POWERFUL write!... I absolutely loved it :) You have a way of capturing the readers mind... and transporting them to the thoughts you are conveying... and the profoundness of them. A very unique and well written poem... DEEP :) Well done on this one!

Take care, and keep writing!

Olwin.

I just belatedly came across your poem Saul. It is good! A deep powerful piece, full of imagery.
Well done. This is a good write.