O.O Holy shit, this is amazing.

Great use of rhyme and rhythm. Great emphasis of the topic.

Amazing write. Love it and favoriting it =)

Plus:

The fools that address our country,
The fools living right next door.
A neighbor to the blind eye of freedom,
A term overused, abused and sore.

Intensely the brain of this world,
Will fade into a foolish stand.
Already over halfway to recession,
Becomes worse after each command.

^^ Would make an awesome chorus, imo. Love the 'A neighbor to the blind eye of freedom/a term overused, abused and sore." especially.

Amazing write Elizabeth ^_^ I love it.

Would give you a 6/5 if I could. :)