Hey! awsome write, i could feel the twisted tangels of inner conflict, it was beautiful! one tweek, if i may...
"But I am my strangler." could be written as "But I am my sole strangler"... just for the rythem ur giving, that would fit.. but amaing all around! 5/5!
Come check out my latet "PAST" and comment? much appreciated! xo keep writing!
J*