Cindy, this is really a dark one. The words made me flinch as I read. It seems to be filled with venom and hatred. I hope this is just a poem about the rewards someone may reap if they indulge in these sinister things.

"Plagued with agonizing pain
Suffering screams of the mind
Afflicted, distorted, disfigured
Ensuing evil makes one blind"
`Your words are extremely powerful and strong.. I'm very impressed. The first line was amazing.. I loved the word plagued, it just added to the pain and mood of the poem and the first stanza. - Also, ensuing evil, I loved the alliteration here.

"De-sending eternal blackness
Nightmare madness takes control
Terrifying sinister laughter
Seizes a tormented soul"
`Wow yet another amazing stanza.. youve portrayed a dark mood and emotions in this piece can easily be felt by the reader. I loved the flow.. its flawless and your poem is so easy to read because of this.

"Beastly demons of past sins
Poison with destructive thoughts
Reek havoc on sanity
Vile wickedness, devil sought"
`I especially loved "poison with destructive thoughts" in this stanza.. your flow is spot on still and smooth.

"Violent seizures, rabid tongue
Charred, scorched, rot, decay
Molten lava, fiery death
Reward for Satan's play"
`Strong ending, nonetheless! You're quite the impressive poet. Way to tie the title in nicely and perfectly.

Well done.
Dark write! Loved it.

5/5.
Temps [Beyond a Poets Mind]

Sensational, this one is amazing. You gave me goose bumps. I really wonder what you had for lunch/dinner before writing this one.... :)
Powerful words leaving deep dark effect on reader's mind.

Blew me away

all the best and take care

Great dark write Cindy, I really enjoyed it, the only advice I can off is watch you syllable count, a couple of your lines were a little off. The opening stanza was right on for me and I like your last two lines. Nice work :)

The title really caught my eye so I was eager to read the piece. :]

What an amazing first stanza! It caught me right from the beginning and had me captivated with your words.

"Suffering screams of the mind"
^Great use or alliteration. The "s" sound sounds evil in a way like a snake which fit in nicely with what you were getting across. I dont know if you did it on purpose or not but either way it worked.

"Afflicted, distorted, disfigured"
^I LOVED this sounded! So horrific and wretched. I could feel what you were saying but just the sound of the words alone without even looking at its meaning. Great play on words...very poetic. Loved your word choice.

I loved how you continued the "s" sound throughout your poem. It was a very consistent move and truly made the meaning behind the poem more effective in its message. A very poetic move indeed and one that made the poem as a whole stand out ot me.

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Violent seizures, rabid tongue
Charred, scorched, rot, decay
Molten lava, fiery death
Reward for Satan's play"
^Great ending! Loved how you put the title in at the end. Nice way to close such an amazing piece.

Your flow was so flawless throughout the whole piece which made for an easy and fluid read. Loved your rhyme scheme because it didnt seem forced but just read naturally. I liked how it was different from the normal reads you see everyday because I felt as if it took me to another place, away form my reality.

Well done!
I really am glad I read this.
*5/5*

Bliss. [Beyond a Poet's Mind.]

Very good, i'm impressed 5/5

I can't remember if I've read a dark poem from you before but sure happy that I read this one.
You've done an excellent job in describing the rewards that awaits those with vile thoughts and evil tendencies.
Your wording was excellent and the flow from starting to end was flawless.Awesome and superbly penned.
Keep up the great work my friend.
Paul...

Cindy! This is so dark and so powerful. Very well crafted