Comments : Dance With Me

  • 15 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    You always said that we could
    fly away.
    Where are your angel wings now?

    Broken and crippled, thanks.

  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    Beautiful. I love the style in which it's written, the words, the brackets the pagebreaks. A masterpiece.

    'I could fall into your lyrics
    and we could wrap you in my verse.'

    ^ I especially like this play on words. Wonderfully done. . . High fives ^^