Ive never heard of this form before, a unique one. Thought you did well with this, loved the title. Your poem spoke the truth, two people will fight but then make up and in the end and their bond becomes stronger.

Good job,
5/5

Temps

If you love someone, you have to be prepared to forgive, a hard thing to do. Well done.

Ingrid, i havent commented your poetry for a long while, in fact i havent commented any poems in far too long. this was a great piece to get me back in the swing of things.

Your words were so true! Both sides of the argument believe full well that they are right. That part was my favourite at it is so true. Neither is prepared to look at it from another point of view.

Really interesting form, i havent seen it around before i dont think. I love that about all of your poetry. You use different forms but still get a strong point across.

5/5

Life is a struggle ,always ingrid , love is changing never stable thing,it si filled with life , we cy we laugh , we love we hate, nothing in life is a 1 line living stable ,

those who love always forgive

CJ

Ingrid,

I love this compact form and also what you have managed to do with it.

Arguments are sometimes necessary, especially when emotion run high in minds that are intensely passionate. If such a mind were able to keep hold of such spontaneity, would it be as wonderful, as awe-inspiring? Probably not! The answer is clear, speak what the heart feels through a mind that can diplomacise the process - practice makes perfect and if not, making up can be very rewarding too!

I liked this poem a lot my dear friend it is so you, so exemplary!

Hugs to you my dear xx

Michael

Something different for me to read and very well done :) 5/5

Nice one! First two stanza are fantastic! Nice form and a nice poem!

Short and sweet. Simple and direct. Great write!

mandy :)

I very knowing insight into our human relationships, presented very well in just 3 verses of 3 lines!
Good work Ingrid!