Skillful hands corrupting skin
Seductive to the flame
Spreading passion everywhere
Screaming out my name

The alliteration here captivated me so much, loved the reiteration of the S.
I'm guessing it was spontaneous. well done sweetie :-)

Time, then, but an afterthought
Burned beyond repair
Sacrificed a beating heart
For one that wasn't there

What is time before the eyes of love, it's absolutely nothing, Isn't it?
I loved the beautiful reality you penned here.

Love the poem a lot!
Write on~

P.S I'm nominating this =)

I loved your word choice, good flow. It seems as though you constructed this piece with ease as your rhyming wasn't forced. Catchy rhythm. Excellent job!