I read this one on the discussion board first :) Silly me!
It was a lovely poem, quite depressing though, but I like it, according to the way I feel now, it came like balm for my mind, knowing I ain't the only one feeling that way, but I have hope and if tis is true for you also, then you should have faith too :)
I liked the usage of words here, and the rhyming(I always fall on rhyming I guess) was perfect, and all of that put together left the poem without a flaw.
Perfect job :)
5/5
Carla