Its a beautiful collaboration... I have already commented on Porcelain Heart

Lonely Rider ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-16

Lovely write...

Dressing the earth's feminine curves in vivacious floral attire,
sovereign yellows and pastel pinks sway harmoniously.

^^loved the personification of mother earth ... it reflects so much beauty... also loved the use of Pastel.. it gives a soft and feminine touch... nicely penned...

Between the blades of grass, bold daisies offer themselves
to become nature's jewelry and hang softly as eternal chains.

^^ here I could imagine the beautiful daisies peeping from lush green grass .. an exotic combination of blue and shades of pink... loved the breathtaking imagery ...

Tranquillized wind expires amidst short spurred fragrant orchids,
proposing a unity and peace treaty for all of nature to embrace.
Exchanged vows: dew drops for flowering, a fresh scent for spring,
composed symphonies for reproducing. A life-sized canvas speaks.

^^ again lovely imgary ... but somewhere the rhythem went off... lovely word choices... its like a beautiful painting of spring deacribed...

Hidden quietly on hills of coated splendor, forget-me-nots whisper
to their neighboring wildflowers, inviting them to grow and prosper.

^^ very sweet ending... with positivess... to grow and prosper...

wonderfully penned...

Dressing the earth's feminine curves in vivacious floral attire,
sovereign yellows and pastel pinks sway harmonious

^^^
Hannah and Joe,

I loved the whole poem, because of it's beautiful descriptions and the serene picture it left in my mind, but the above lines stands out.
It is indeed so that all things connected to earth and earth itself have a sort of feminine roundness to them. I would never have realized that, if you hadn't mentioned it.
Nature and it's creatures have a sort of softness to them and only the things we, humans added are different....a building is so ungly compared to a mountain and the sound of cars and motorcycles pollutes the air, as opposed to the beautiful chirping of birds:)

A very good job!
(seamless too)
*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

A beautiful sight, wildflowers growing on hillsides where least expected. So many colors and kinds, they are breathtaking. The collab was seamless. Well done to both.

What a lovely read. :]
Nature poems are fast becoming my favourite at the moment. Ones that are written well are so expressive.. the imagery engulfs the reader and i just love that. You two excelled at this, i was engaged the whole time and the imagery was fantastic. As a collab you work really well together i think. It flowed fabulously and it was a stunning read. I really enjoyed it!
Keep up the awesome work.
5/5