So many fragrances to smell
Feel the gentle breeze
Touch the many blossoms
See nature change the trees
Glorious Spring!

You have described Spring so well, I can feel it through your words, great imagery. and as always your rhymes are perfect.
A beautiful write, my dear friend!

Spring is glorious, so many new sights and sounds, my favorite time of the year. Well done.

Nature at my doorstep
Squirrels burying their find
Blue jays in the bushes
Noises I don't mind

^^ I love the Koel cooing in summer and squirrels jumping on trees... noise!! not at al... I love love... this stanza brought all the beautiful spring memories :)

So many fragrances to smell
Feel the gentle breeze
Touch the many blossoms
See nature change the trees
Glorious Spring!
^^
I feel like going out and feel the breeze blowing ... lovely imagery ... beautifully penned :)

Enjoyable write... nicely done... I like the description of Spring. A beautiful write.

A great ode to spring Rachel, I really enjoyed reading it, especially since spring is just arriving.

Nature at my doorstep
Squirrels burying their find
Blue jays in the bushes
Noises I don't mind

^I am not sure what it is, maybe because these 2 things happen outside my window lol but I like this stanza, the flow was spot on and it made me smile.

Great work.

I totally love what you wrote here... you really manged to capture how nature works. It's beautiful how nature can be passing through the seasons.

Congrats on winning the Spring Fling contest.....Awesome poem :)
Love Aunt Cindy

Good job! That was a very lovely ode to springtime, my favorite verse was the first one. Refreshing (:

The sun peers in my window
Cardinals in the pines
Sing the song of springtime
Morning glories grow on vines
^^^
The imagery is delightful in your opening stanza Rachel. The sun, birds, flowers ... beautiful !

Nature at my doorstep
Squirrels burying their find
Blue jays in the bushes
Noises I don't mind
^^^
I love the first line here ... just gives me a wonderful image of opening your door and watching a beautiful scene unfold.

So many fragrances to smell
Feel the gentle breeze
Touch the many blossoms
See nature change the trees
Glorious Spring!
^^^
Your ending is brilliant. I love how you have smell, feel, touch, see .... and through your words I see a glorious Spring.

Awesome read Rachel, thanks for sharing

It took way too long to get here, spring finds ways of being so elusive. You did a great job here and the imagery was good and words placed just right to give us the glimses into what spring means to you and to most of us. Hope you like summer as well. peace

Beautifully descriptive and alive with the sights sounds and smells of Spring!

Awesome write with nicely flowing verses and impeccable rhyming...nice!