Comments : City Sounds

  • 15 years ago

    by Melissa

    That is too cute, Corinne! Poor mouse, can't help but feel sorry for the little bugger.

    A fun read! ;o)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Funny and I too feel sorry for the mouse. lol Good job with this Corrine.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Corinne
    Love the way you have discribed the sounds of your city home :)
    Excellent job!
    ((HUGS))
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Lilly Tagloff

    That's quite nifty.
    i like the similes/metaphors.
    of how you described the sounds you hear.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lilly Tagloff

    Oh..but it can be a bit confusing at times.