Ah ha. Edward Cullen. So many people fantasize over him, it's quite sad.
So on to the poem. Very well written. I loved that one single piece of dialogue. It changed the narrator's state of mind and attitude, which was clearly identified by the reader. Personally, I thought it was long, but since I don't read long poems that often...You get the idea. But I did like this poem. The reader could identify with the emotions in this poem.

Keep it up.

Krista

Lol-gotta love twilight references :). amazing piece of writing you got going there. absolutely brilliant!!!! some of the stanzas were absolutely amazing-the langage, the imagery-everything-brilliant.
another 5/5
aish'x