Comments : Weight

  • 12 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Wow, beutiful story of the person that takes everything and keeps it inside as it builds up over time it kills them from the inside out till they cant take it much longer. I definatly can relate to this poem, and i am sure many others can too. keep up the good work, a 5/5 indeed. You keep writting and I'll keep reading