"Gave you time and listened long
Corrected your grammar if you were wrong
Wrote you poems and made you cry
Told you his dreams and made you sigh"

WOW!!, Just a big 'O' WOW.., I Loved it WOWOWOWOW I can't stop Wowing man!!

THis was an amazing write. The flow was perfection the meaning deep. The words just kept me reading. No critic, 5/5

Such a touching write David.

So today I hang my head in shame
And let her know I was to blame
I feel so cold, I feel so rotten
My love is gone but not forgotten
^^^
This ending really makes one re-think their life and the way they treat "their other half"

Very very touching!