Nitin
it is always special to me whenever I get to write with you. Now Stepping into something new. You made it so much fun. Thanks for everything yaar!
Love you
Cindy

This is dark and speaks of society to me and it's ills. Nice collab for you both. Well done.

Very touching write... dark indeed...

Bible in hands of the poor
Rich become masters of sin
Dead wandering centuries
But their greed wont give in

^^ the last line is so true... greed is what that has resulted in the outbreak of so many mishappenings...

Screams echo in the night
Beastly demons enflict pain
Disfigured tormented souls
Drive a normal man insane

^^ There's a deep meaning hidden in these words... well penned...

Garden of corpses wait
Walk with me my love
Few angels along with evil
All fallen from high above

^^I loved this stanza... there's a longingess for someone to walk with you... to hold you when you fall... the last two lines are thought provoking... angels and evils...both from above... loved it...

Mist sourrounds black roses
Hold my hand show me the way
Thorns waiting to draw blood
Lay with me in our grave

^^just couldnt stop reading these verses... so so touching...

loved the title too... :)

Very dark, yet very well done. There is a wide schism between the poor and rich. Not sure how I feel about the glamorization of death and darkness though. There is a charm to the dark, but light has its beauty as well.

I somehow didn't like the rhyme of this piece.
it went off in most of the stanzas.
But overall a very dark poem that attracts readers, of course those who love dark poetry.

Try not to focus on the rhyme way too much next time and it's going to work out perfectly :)
well done both of you!

Bible in hands of the poor
Rich become masters of sin
Dead wandering centuries
But their greed wont give in

Awesome!!! Loved the whole piece, especially the opening stanza. Dark poems likhna koi tumse seekhe....

Great write, really like the title.