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Your repetition of : Winter's been sacked is very effective. You can tell that it was written as a younger person. The sentence structure shows it, although you wrote much better then I did.
It is quite a cute poem and I love the personification you put behind it.
by just ashley
This poem is really cute :) i liked it
by Grunge Angel
As I read this...I became more and more amused at the changing desciption of Winter. By the end I was laughing a bit, and the last stanza in my opinion was great. Perfect way to end a poem. Great job!
by Maple Tree
Now this piece is very unique, and i really enjoyed ~ there is humor, beauty and a creative splash of words.... very nice !