Comments : March-ing Orders

  • 11 years ago

    by flutterflies

    Your repetition of : Winter's been sacked is very effective. You can tell that it was written as a younger person. The sentence structure shows it, although you wrote much better then I did.

    It is quite a cute poem and I love the personification you put behind it.


  • 11 years ago

    by just ashley

    This poem is really cute :) i liked it

  • 9 years ago

    by Grunge Angel

    As I read this...I became more and more amused at the changing desciption of Winter. By the end I was laughing a bit, and the last stanza in my opinion was great. Perfect way to end a poem. Great job!

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Now this piece is very unique, and i really enjoyed ~ there is humor, beauty and a creative splash of words.... very nice !