This is absolutely amazing-brilliant work!
It flows great-the fingers motif is stong throughout and very effective!
I think this poem is one of the best ive read in ages, simple-but i can relate to it very well.
an easy 5/5
aish
xx

I generaly don't read love poems because most of the time I just can't get through em.
I was able to get through this one with a smile on my face. nice job 5/5