I found this poem intriguing. The words captured my attention immediately. The metaphors were greatly used.

'A sunset is peaceful
but so is a song
the sun disappears
the lyrics are gone'

^There are no words to describe this, I found it interesting to say the least. The flow in this write lacked in little places though was otherwise great. I especially love how (perhaps it was just in my head) but the poem began slowly before slowly increasing in it's sort of pace.