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by Ingrid de Klerck
Well John..this certainly is a very deep Haiku!
You impressed me deeply..hats off for you, my friend.
It did make me a little sad reading it, I could see it in front of me, such a gloomy picture..
A short but good poem Mr B,
John as always you seem to posess that special something to say so much in a few lines. Your words are always magical and this brings a hint of sadness. I loved the title as well. Awesom Job!
Very thought provoking, And it's as though it's understandable at the same time - though I couldn't tell you exactly what it means! Sort of like Jabberwocky!
Perhaps the best haiku I've read on here... So deep for 3 little lines.
Great work and thanks for sharing! :)