Comments : Close your eyes

  • 13 years ago

    by lonelydreamer

    Wow really nice work. i love how you made it flow so easily. i also liked the rhyming. i can only imagine living in a world of darkness and blackness. through my eyes everything is gray. i loved it

  • 13 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    This was a wonderfully written poem. You repeated the first verse, and yet you changed the smallest of details and yet changed it's meaning. A thought provoking write. Well Done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "Darkness calls,
    It pulls me in,
    I try to stall
    But darkness wins.
    Right from wrong,
    Wrong from right,
    I don't care;
    I've lost the fight."

    These lines really hit home with me mostly because I'm usually a loner and am constantly shunned by other people. So it's greatly relate to me and others like me, if any.