This is a very emotional poem, and very well written compared to the last poem in which i read of yours.

We spend the entire hello
saying goodbye
- this is a line which will stick in my mind for sometime because its so memorable.

its an incredibly sad poem and i have no faults with it, the entire imagery and metaphors throughout is at a very high standards.

the running and the enjambents throughout works very well with the formation as well as the flow of the poem.

its a dif nomination.
loved it