Comments : Stone beneath a tree

  • 15 years ago

    by Deana

    Kay this is so beautiful and sad...it reminded me of some graves that I once saw in Virginia , very old and forgotten, it made you wonder what that persons life had been like...very thought provoking, excellent!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kay
    you did a wonderful job on the club image contest. The imagery is awesome.

    No salt filled tears do fall
    Only leaves that seldom shed
    No flowers offer memories
    For soil the only bed

    How sad and lonely is the grave that stands alone.

    A lonely chiseled marker
    with dates difficult to view
    A brother, son and soldier
    is the only remaining clue

    The tombstones of the centuries that mark that one time this person lived breathed and loved.

    No widow lain beside him
    To profess a life was shared
    No other graves surround it
    Like no-one ever cared

    So many young men lose their lives before thay even have tiime to live.

    In pine bark shadows
    from a north-winds brace
    Eras that are by gone
    No name was left to trace

    This ending is perfect and brings a tear to the eye.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I often wonder what the stories are when visiting a cemetary. Men, women, children, who were they in life. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by John Long

    Poignant but resisting the temptation to fall into sentimentality. Rich in imagery but thought provoking, well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wonderful write; the apparent lonliness is so evident and the tree as a silent backdrop adds to the melancholy.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    I loved this one..
    very touching...
    a tomestone can tell so many stories... beautifully penned...

  • 14 years ago

    by silvertung69

    That sorrow all from a picture.That is so wounderful. grate stuff!

  • 14 years ago

    by Clown

    Every word here was has intense has the first. This poem was very picky and without waste, the words painting a brillant picture for all to see. It is flawless in my opinion. The thoughts or lost loved one hold fast to my mind, and i kept thinking, is this his future? to be a lonly grave standing next to an acient tree?

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    No subject or style of writing seem to escape your tallented mind my friend.
    I admired and respect your tallent as poetess and enjoyed reading your beautiful verses.
    This is no exception.You've donne a wonderful job with this piece.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...