Well I think it must have been hard for you to pen this down and share it with the readers. But no doubt that it is good to let things out. Though the poem portray a gloomy side of the protagonist, but yyou hva e structured this poem well.Another amazing write from you. Keep it up

Excellent Job

Really nice poem, its nice reading through and sounds like a story. I think the followig need changes. But a hurrican stroked should be but a hurrican striked.. And he covered his self should be he covered himself. Generally brilliant write, keep up.