That was pretty awesome! It showed alot of emotion in such a simple form of words. Great job. Im gonna go check out your other poems! Keep writing, you're doing an awesome job!
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Hey..i read a bunch of your poems and i think your an awesome writer!!! good job and best of luck ;)

Wicked awesome.. haha.. I like the way you write.. It's pretty great.. Now.. ahem.. (Off to read part 2)

that poem was really great, i really enjoyed readin it and it was so descriptive, keep it up