Comments : Quicksand and concrete sidewalks

  • 13 years ago

    by Kurt

    I like the title for the poem. That is what originally pulled me in. This was a great read and I enjoyed the mix up in the cookie-cutter style that is so prominent on this site. The imperfect rhymes aid the rhythm and flow and help move the poem along. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by NiQk

    Good... hard to follow

  • 13 years ago

    by Marissa

    I really like this. peaked my interests. different from most of the poems i read. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK