Good poem
True love is also normally the most painful at times

I like this it was a good flowing poem that kept on the story

Hope you can visit my poems and comment too some are along the same lines

Take care
XocX

The theme was right on
The mesage was right on
The emotions were present
The message was clear
The rhyme was off a little
The rhythm was off a little, some lines way longer than the others.

But over all it was a nice poem.
Good luck.

-David

it a good poem very strong on the
emotion!!

keep it up :)

awww.swet poem...very touching...5/5