Well I like how you start out the poem as simple and innocent then slowly mold the poem filled with your philosophy and metaphors. I love the way you end it.

PS: if this is based on a true event then why don't u make the 1st move.either that or u'll forever be wondering for the whole of your entire life..."what if i had just asked him?".

Well it certainly has been delightful to read this poem.

Excellent Job