Hey

Nice poem, it had alot of emotion in it, thats what made it what it was. Don't focus on rhyming so much, your poems would flow so much better, i hope everything works out for you. Keep writing cause i'll keep reading.
Luv,

-Blue ^_~

Well regardless of any arguments we may have in the forums, I just read some of your poems, and I think they are pretty damn good. They have a nice flow to them, and they seem very heartfelt. Excellent work, keep it up.

awsome poem.. I like this one a lot.. very good..!!5/5