Im sorry about whatever made you write this and i care for you so you know. Very nice poem. I like your style and the way you word it out. It has a lot of meaning i can tell. And somewhat feel what you are saying. Good job.

I really liked this poem. I felt the pain in it.
And to "vanilla" anna Is not a girl it is a term for anorexia. Look up "pro-anna" on google.
Great job ash.

I really liked this poem. I felt the pain in it.
And to "vanilla" anna Is not a girl it is a term for anorexia. Look up "pro-anna" on google.
Great job ash.

This poem is really good
its deep...real deep...luv it 5/5

Great poem, a little lacking in some places but besides that very vivid in my head and the point your making gets across well. 5

Powerful and enjoyable poem so purrfect in every way 5/5

This is deep. Dark, but deep. Well written too. They way it's structured compliments it's dark nature. I also love how you don't get to know the antagonist until the end, it's well thought out. Good write :)

If you're a fan of rock at all, listen to Anna's Song by Silverchair - if you haven't already heard it. They're an Aussie band relatively close to where I live. You might like em :)