I thought this was a beautiful write... that was well written and expressed.I loved the storyline... and how it ended :) It's a great poem... but would maybe look even better if you divided it up into 4 line stanzas, the rhyming pattern would look so good then... it sounds good!

Well done,
Olwin.

That was amazing.
I don't know what else to say.
That was great it brang a tear to my eye and I felt like I was living in the poem.

Well done
5/5

ox