Nice to see you do a collab and on a love poem. The flow is somewhat choppy although the message does come through.

Kelleyana
This tells the story of a true love that is left without the other half. What a sad and lonely place to be.
Good job!
Take care
Cindy

Oh my, what a sad verse...

To be left behind is the most horrible thing..and to visit the places where you once used to go together can make a heart break from grief. You two have captured this feeling very well within your words.

A very moving write, well done:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

ps: could you add a link to your friends's page at the bottom?

Awww Kel... this collab is so touching. This compelling love story is really on par with 'The Notebook'. I like the idea of how the magical bench works like a time capsule bring him back to the glory days of the time he had with her.Great Job the both of you. Seriously i couldn't tell who wrote which verse and that's what makes this collab a great one.

You both done a great job on this collab. I loved the story you told and the kind of love that was portrayed here. Great Job