Waw, this poem just caught my eyes from the beginning until the end. I love and admire your choice of words and the feelings it gives. Very well done, i must move on to read the others, 5/5, kel.

Wow Azzza!

Very impressive poem by you, my friend..

I loved the whole concept, because I strongly believe spiritual awareness and the benefits that come along with it can hit us at any given time..the"right"time for our soul be to enlightened. To each individual this moment comes at a different stage in life, for some only at the very end of their journey...but reading your words I feel you have reached it already:)

Beautiful, meaningful and definately worth rereading many times! One small ting: skip the word "new"in the last line, that makes the words stronger, because you already stated the fact it is a rebirth, so it's double:)

* big hugs to you:)*

5/5 Ingrid

Overall it was a well written piece, however it could use a few minor things to help it out. For example, punctuation. Punctuation is very important in poetry it lets the reader know when to pause or stop as well as adding to the overall flow. You also don't need to capitalize the begining of every line. The only time you need to use capitalization is when you are starting a sentence or you are emphisizing something. Other than that it was well written, keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

A really powerful poem, the flow and vocabulary is just superb. The rhymes fit well Eventhough forced at some parts. I loved reading your work, keep up.

An excellent read, It was as if you took the reader on a journey through your discovery of your self, The mind is such a complicated thing and yet you seemed to have emerged from your introspection a strong person! very well done!

Such a good poem Azzza :)

"I'm drunk when I'm sober
Life begins when it's over"
^Actually I discussed this with my sister and she was like: it should be "I'm sober when I'm drunk" but I myself still see this one good, removing fillers gives several choices.
My fave lines..well done Azzza.

Your rhyme someone misguided me..sometimes you rhymed the stanza, and sometimes you didn't..though your rhyme is often good. So I don't mind this.

Great write!
Write on

I thought this poem was just amazing. It captured my attention from start to finish... A brilliant write.

Living in a delusional world
Protest to live in reality
I found nirvana within me
As I meditate in tranquility

A very good start to a excellent poem. Though it's my favorite only the tip of what is to come in the rest of the poem
Enjoyable read

Wow, this was amazing, i loved the flow and imagery. excellent poem 5/5

I really like this the way you set it up and the words you used you can get a real sense of where your coming from in this piece. Good Job n hang in there.