This poem was very cute :). It was so positive and warm, like summer. I love how you used everything associated with summer in it as well. Wonderful piece.
<3Rach

Hey Loni,
well i have to say congradulations. ha ha I'm like a total emo kid and this even made me wanna go dancing so just know you did a great job!!!!

this was such a fun poem and just made my night. you are so talented and really have the ability to write ANY genre which is something most poets cant do, it just shows how undeniably talented you are!!!!

i just loved every word of this poem, it was so unique and just absolutely adorable!!!! makes me wanna get up and dance =) great job, keep up the awesome wok!!!!

A cute and funny little piece indeed.Takes one mind away from all the hurt and anguish on this site.Good job with this piece.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...

I really enjoyed reading this. Simple, but being simple is sometimes the best way to do it. Very good.