Comments : Our Dear Alice

  • 14 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Call alice, she needs to talk.

  • 14 years ago

    by Miranda

    This is really deep and beautifully written. The ending makes the poem lose some of its flow, but I think that's how it's supposed to be? Just kind of a blunt and sudden end.

    You're a brilliant poet. Don't stop writing.
    5/5