I like how you've written this from a more thoughtful point of view.. Many people have felt this way. It's cool to see how many different ways people can portray the same emotions through writing

My feelings are hitting
Like a rapid whirl wind
My teeth are gritting
To me, what I've done was sinned

*I like this. I would change the last line to "To me, wht I did was a sin". Just sounds a little better to me. But other than that I love the imagery*

I can't seem to get you off my mind
And now days begin to brew
Where everything else is left behind
As I speed off to catch you

*Good stanza. I feel like I'm reading a story and I'm waiting for the climax. Nice.*

Someday you'll be mine
My only, my beloved, my dear
And on that day everything will be fine
When we hold each other so very near

*I love how you change mood here. Very beautiful diction*

Now though the wind round me rolls
Whispering my passions for you
I'm caught in this thinkers pose
Trying to figure what should I do

*Good, I think changing the last line to "Trying to figure out what i should do" flows better.*

Then again maybe you'll never be mine
And in time I'll find
Things will never be fine
Just trying to get you off my mind

*I think it was clever togive the readers hope of her being yours then changing it in the ending. Very nice work. I love the style and the simple flow. Keep it up. Nik*

I like the imagery that comes with poem. :) The title is very hooking; I think everyone comes to feel like this in their life.