Nicely written. I like how you unfurl this story of yours from how you both 1st met to how the story ends.

I could never see the colors of the sunset
In the messed up world you were my guiding hand
In the darkness you were my brightest sun
Now you have left me, in the darkness all alone

^^^ I think this stanza stood out for me as it portrtays how you think of him. It must have hurt you deep when you were left alone in the dark.

The ending was brilliant. I like how you show your smile as the facade of your pain.

Excellent Job