Not great is right. It's amazing. I love everything about this poem. The style was simple and each stanze flowed nicely. I love the imagery and the diction. Very emotional. Keep it up hun. Shanik

This poem is fantastic.
it such a lovely piece to read. you have an excellent way with words. This poem really captured my attention from the beginning, it was full of passion and emotion and i truly enjoyed reading it.
well done
5/5